опубликованный 3 месяцы тому назад в

Save The Poet By Ifeoma Elechi _15-08-24_15-35-49-703

  • 84
  • 18
  • 0
  • 2
  • 8
  • 0

My entry for the monthly poetry challenge.

Текст песни

Title: Save the poet.
(SUBTITLE: I'm the poem, not the poet.)

* Sound of an ambulance siren*

Everybody hates the sound of an ambulance, of cause it declares the state of an emergency.

This is an emergency!
For I am not the poet; I am the unfinished poem.
I am the written note lying on the table, soaked up in tears and covered with anxiety med.

I am the unfinished metaphors of their hidden thoughts and the hidden similies like their chameleon smile whenever they stand behind these mics.

I am not the poet; I am the unfinished poem, and this poem will remain unfinished if we don't save the poet in ward 1.

There is a poet whose doubt in himself is as obvious as the canvas-looking sky.

In ward 2, there is a poet who doesn't want to learn from the stars because he claims he is the star.

In ward 3, there is a poet whose stage fright frightens his brain to forget his lines in front of an itching audience.

In ward 4, there is a poet who covers the truth with metaphors, passing empty messages yet speaking with all authority, 
swinging his hands up and down like a drummer who is beating around the bush.

But the heart beat of each poets in ward 18 caught my attention,
It was filled with 16 passionate poets,
It felt like a room of proverbs which says,
A gift of a man maketh room for him and bringeth him before great men.

Dear Poet,
This is an unfinished poem with a message, yet incomplete to completely pass it message,
so I fling open a blank page for you,
fill it up with words and not with tears and anxiety med,
after all I am not the poet,
I am just a poem waiting for your next line of action.

💯💯 keep it up

00:44

🔥🔥🔥🔥powerful words

💯💯

I'm not a poet, I'm just a poem looking for your next line of action.

"and this poem will remain unfinished if we don't save the poet in ward 1"

I love that the poet is the "unfinished poem". I love that she is the figures of speech. This is so striking, relatable for every poet out there, and I hope it draws many a poet out of the hospital. Thank you for this piece, Ifeoma Elechi!

00:46

Always a pleasure listening to your poetry Lyrical

01:05

Amazing 💯❤❤💯

8 Комментарии

  • KINGSLEY PETER

    💯💯 keep it up

     
    1724092952
    640
  • Manasseh B. Abbah 00:44

    🔥🔥🔥🔥powerful words

     
    1723890883
    • Ifeoma_Elechi

      i really appreciate 🙏

      3 месяцы тому назад
    640
  • Uche

    💯💯

     
    1723886766
    • Ifeoma_Elechi

      i really appreciate 🙏

      3 месяцы тому назад
    640
  • Adetuyi Samuel

    I'm not a poet, I'm just a poem looking for your next line of action.

     
    1723875469
    • Ifeoma_Elechi

      😅😅...thanks a lot

      3 месяцы тому назад
    640
  • Ifreke ukoudo

    "and this poem will remain unfinished if we don't save the poet in ward 1"

     
    1723842513
    640
  • Tongjal, W. N.

    I love that the poet is the "unfinished poem". I love that she is the figures of speech. This is so striking, relatable for every poet out there, and I hope it draws many a poet out of the hospital. Thank you for this piece, Ifeoma Elechi!

     
    1723779455
    • Ifeoma_Elechi

      I sincerely appreciate 🙏

      3 месяцы тому назад
    640
  • Salome Ogbolu 00:46

    Always a pleasure listening to your poetry Lyrical

     
    1723760780
    • Ifeoma_Elechi

      thank you so much🙏

      3 месяцы тому назад
    640
  • Hillary Pius 01:05

    Amazing 💯❤❤💯

     
    1723756421
    • Ifeoma_Elechi

      i am really grateful 🙏

      3 месяцы тому назад
    640
::
/ ::

Очередь

Очистить